IELTS | Atabaev | 9.0
21.04.202510:10
Sam Altman admits that saying "Please" and "Thank You" to ChatGPT is wasting millions of dollars in computing power.
Do you always say these words to ChatGPT after assessing your essays?
Do you always say these words to ChatGPT after assessing your essays?
07.04.202510:16
Otabek is another Niner from Samarkand!
I have provided some little feedback on his strengths and weaknesses in the Writing module. I'm glad I could help someone get his desired 9.0. Also, the guy has scored his 5th 9.0 on Speaking. What a beast.
Check out his channel: @educationAB_1817
I have provided some little feedback on his strengths and weaknesses in the Writing module. I'm glad I could help someone get his desired 9.0. Also, the guy has scored his 5th 9.0 on Speaking. What a beast.
Check out his channel: @educationAB_1817
04.04.202513:25
bularni hammasiga model/sample reportlar yozilgan.
Bazilari shu channel da, bazilarini Pauline Cullen yozganla.
Bazilari shu channel da, bazilarini Pauline Cullen yozganla.
O'chirildi05.04.202505:41
04.04.202512:32
Number of years?
31.03.202515:14
It is a very simplified version for lower level candidates, but it is what it basically looks like.
25.03.202505:37
When approaching IELTS Speaking Part 2, it’s best to get straight to the point. Many candidates spend too much time on lengthy introductions before beginning their story. Instead, start directly with a phrase like “I would like to describe…” and then launch into your narrative. This concise approach not only saves time but also keeps your answer focused and engaging for the examiner, who prefers clear and direct responses over elaborate preambles.
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Ozodbek’s IELTS
19.04.202510:05
Bepul Reading Marafon 📖
IELTS 9.0 sohibi, Ozodbek Botiraliyev bilan 20 kun davomida IELTS Reading’ni oddiy va tushunarli usulda o‘zlashtirasiz.
Reading’dan qiynalib yurgan o’quvchilar uchun ajoyib imkoniyat.
🚀 Start: 20-Aprel!
Marafon mutlaqo bepul va hech qanday odam qo’shish sharti yo’q! Qo‘shilish uchun hoziroq linkni bosing:
https://t.me/+74TMMEYfCswzYWVi
https://t.me/+74TMMEYfCswzYWVi
IELTS 9.0 sohibi, Ozodbek Botiraliyev bilan 20 kun davomida IELTS Reading’ni oddiy va tushunarli usulda o‘zlashtirasiz.
Reading’dan qiynalib yurgan o’quvchilar uchun ajoyib imkoniyat.
🚀 Start: 20-Aprel!
Marafon mutlaqo bepul va hech qanday odam qo’shish sharti yo’q! Qo‘shilish uchun hoziroq linkni bosing:
https://t.me/+74TMMEYfCswzYWVi
https://t.me/+74TMMEYfCswzYWVi
05.04.202501:49
Dear Candidates,
Please be informed that, effective from April 2nd, the updated pricing will be as follows:
Test fee - 2 470 000 sum
Transfer - 615 000 sum
EOR 1 510 000 sum
OSR - 1 650 000 sum
Please be informed that, effective from April 2nd, the updated pricing will be as follows:
Test fee - 2 470 000 sum
Transfer - 615 000 sum
EOR 1 510 000 sum
OSR - 1 650 000 sum
04.04.202513:24
04.04.202512:00
Ready?
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31.03.202515:13
One very effective practice to implement into your Task 2 prep is something I used to do a lot back in 2017. I managed to improve my writing score from 5.5 to 6.5 at the time. Here is what you do:
1) Take a sample essay (band 8.0+)
2) Break the main body paragraphs into chunks of ideas so it looks like a plan
*3) If you can, exchange with your peer and both of you write a full main body out of each other's plan (different essays)
The point behind this practice is that it helps you understand and see what the essay actually is about (the gist), as well as the process of turning the plan into a proper body paragraph. You will significantly improve your C&C and TR scores. Guaranteed!
1) Take a sample essay (band 8.0+)
2) Break the main body paragraphs into chunks of ideas so it looks like a plan
*3) If you can, exchange with your peer and both of you write a full main body out of each other's plan (different essays)
The point behind this practice is that it helps you understand and see what the essay actually is about (the gist), as well as the process of turning the plan into a proper body paragraph. You will significantly improve your C&C and TR scores. Guaranteed!
24.03.202513:23
Many IELTS students become obsessed with 'linkers' - words or phrases that link ideas together in a paragraph e.g. firstly, secondly, furthermore, moreover. There is nothing wrong with using linkers, and they can certainly help you to write good paragraphs.
However, linkers become a problem when they are the only thing that students care about. Examiners care much more about the content between the linkers.
As an experiment, try writing a paragraph without linking words. Can you still make your paragraph coherent? Note: you probably don't use many linkers when you write in your own language!
However, linkers become a problem when they are the only thing that students care about. Examiners care much more about the content between the linkers.
As an experiment, try writing a paragraph without linking words. Can you still make your paragraph coherent? Note: you probably don't use many linkers when you write in your own language!
18.04.202508:57
Extreme sports should be banned.
Do you agree or disagree?
Plan:
- No, it is too big to ban
- creates jobs, provides money
- contrast (no industry = no money)
- also, the black market
- e.g. BASE jumping in the US
- illegal sports harder to control
One clear reason why extreme sports should not be banned is that they are a large and growing industry that brings a lot of money. These sports create jobs through tourism, equipment sales, and media coverage, and they help local and national economies. If they were completely banned, it could cause financial problems and even lead to illegal events, which are usually more dangerous because they have no safety rules. For instance, when BASE jumping was banned in some areas of the United States, many people started doing it secretly in unsafe places, and this led to more accidents and made it harder for the authorities to control.
04.04.202513:31
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04.04.202505:47
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31.03.202511:51
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Diyorbek's IELTS
19.03.202512:05
Life is simple.
1 You take the mock test here
2 You take the real exam here
3 You are happy
To be happy, write to @diyorbeksielts_mock
1 You take the mock test here
2 You take the real exam here
3 You are happy
To be happy, write to @diyorbeksielts_mock
04.04.202513:31
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04.04.202512:43
Example 1
04.04.202504:51
IELTS WRITING NINERDAN BEPUL DARS!
- Dars: Jonli
- Vaqt: 17:15
- Mavzu: Task 1 turlari (Advanced)
- Til: O'zbek tilida
Link 👇👇👇
https://t.me/ielts_atabaev
https://t.me/ielts_atabaev
https://t.me/ielts_atabaev
- Dars: Jonli
- Vaqt: 17:15
- Mavzu: Task 1 turlari (Advanced)
- Til: O'zbek tilida
Link 👇👇👇
https://t.me/ielts_atabaev
https://t.me/ielts_atabaev
https://t.me/ielts_atabaev
31.03.202511:51
Another way to link ideas between or within sentences is to use pronouns and determiners like it, they, which, this, that.
And perhaps the most 'advanced' form of linking involves no linking words at all. Instead, you rely on the topic vocabulary itself to create cohesion.
And perhaps the most 'advanced' form of linking involves no linking words at all. Instead, you rely on the topic vocabulary itself to create cohesion.
19.03.202511:34
In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime.
Why is this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
I got this Task 2 question prompt on my latest exam. Here is the plan I had that got me Task Response 9.0:
Reason:
- Career opportunities => salary, new team, promotion
Reason:
- Higher living standards => climate, infrastructure
Positive:
- Cultural diversity => various ethnicities and range of cultures mix (e.g. Tashkent)
Positive:
- Local communities benefit => companies attract better specialists, schools get better teachers (e.g. remote areas in Uzb)
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