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12.04.202516:34
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20.01.202511:20
🔃 How large a vocabulary is needed to get a Band 7 for Writing? Does vocabulary really matter in Writing?
To achieve a Band 7 in Writing, a large vocabulary matters a lot. If you look at the IELTS public band descriptors (see here), you’ll notice that the Band 7 category for vocabulary (“Lexical Resource”) says the following:
— Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision;
— Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation;
— May produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation.
It is important to pay attention to the phrase “sufficient range”. This means that you need to use a wide range of simple AND less common vocabulary. For example, if the topic of the question relates to cars, don’t just keep writing “cars” for the whole essay; use less common synonyms for “car” like “vehicle”, “automobile”, etc. It would be unnatural to only use less common vocabulary, so remember to use a mixture of simple and more complex words.
It is also important that you show “some awareness of style and collocation” as you use less common vocabulary. This means that you shouldn’t just use a less common word because you memorized it; you should be able to use it in an appropriate context where native speakers would be likely to use it. To become skilled at this, you should:
— watch a wide range of English language videos (TED talks, TV shows, movies, etc.);
— read a wide range of English language texts (website and newspaper articles, books, etc.) so that you can develop a feel for the language.
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To achieve a Band 7 in Writing, a large vocabulary matters a lot. If you look at the IELTS public band descriptors (see here), you’ll notice that the Band 7 category for vocabulary (“Lexical Resource”) says the following:
— Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision;
— Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation;
— May produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation.
It is important to pay attention to the phrase “sufficient range”. This means that you need to use a wide range of simple AND less common vocabulary. For example, if the topic of the question relates to cars, don’t just keep writing “cars” for the whole essay; use less common synonyms for “car” like “vehicle”, “automobile”, etc. It would be unnatural to only use less common vocabulary, so remember to use a mixture of simple and more complex words.
It is also important that you show “some awareness of style and collocation” as you use less common vocabulary. This means that you shouldn’t just use a less common word because you memorized it; you should be able to use it in an appropriate context where native speakers would be likely to use it. To become skilled at this, you should:
— watch a wide range of English language videos (TED talks, TV shows, movies, etc.);
— read a wide range of English language texts (website and newspaper articles, books, etc.) so that you can develop a feel for the language.
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27.04.202519:18
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21.04.202513:38
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15.04.202518:29
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12.04.202515:15
27.01.202511:25
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16.01.202508:32
🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay315
〰️ to retain smth: to keep something; to continue to have something
— Example: She has a good memory and finds it easy to retain facts.
〰️ To impair smth: to damage something or make something worse.
— Example: His age impaired his chances of finding a new job.
〰️ To be vulnerable to smth: weak and easily hurt physically or emotionally
— Example: Old people are particularly vulnerable to the flu.
〰️ chaos: a state of complete confusion and lack of order
— Example: The house was in chaos after the party.
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〰️ to retain smth: to keep something; to continue to have something
— Example: She has a good memory and finds it easy to retain facts.
〰️ To impair smth: to damage something or make something worse.
— Example: His age impaired his chances of finding a new job.
〰️ To be vulnerable to smth: weak and easily hurt physically or emotionally
— Example: Old people are particularly vulnerable to the flu.
〰️ chaos: a state of complete confusion and lack of order
— Example: The house was in chaos after the party.
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27.04.202517:55
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20.04.202519:32
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12.04.202513:01
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“The hardest language to learn is Japanese.”
- “The most difficult language to learn is Japanese”
- “The most difficult language to be good at is Japanese.”
- “The most difficult language to master is Japanese.”
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27.01.202511:05
#Essay316 #Writing #Task2
☘️ Problem & Solution
✅ Q: Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
💡 Answer:
There are several reasons why many people have a negative attitude towards international tourism. However, this can be handled by adopting possible solutions, as will now be discussed.
Firstly, the influx of foreign travelers is often associated with an increase in the level of environmental pollution. Many tourists throw rubbish into the surroundings irresponsibly, which contributes to air, water and soil contamination. In addition, there might be a growing demand for transport, decreasing the air quality at the tourist destination.
Secondly, international tourism increases the odds of spreading infectious diseases into the local community. Viruses such as Ebola and H5N1 can become a threat to the locals if an infected traveler visits their country. In Vietnam, for example, many people died after a visitor from Hong Kong carried the H5N1 virus to the country in 2003. This example makes it clear why many people are still against the development of international tourism.
However, there are a range of options that can be taken to improve the situation. One measure would be that the government should continue campaigns to raise the awareness of tourists when they pay a visit to a new land. Travellers should be encouraged to put waste into the right place or to use public transport if possible. Another remedy is that there should be medical checks at airports and borders. This is to guarantee that infected visitors should be quarantined to halt the spread of the disease.
In conclusion, negative feelings about global tourism still are common in society. However, this can be resolved by taking the above suggestions.
✍️ Total words: 262
📍Band: 7.5+
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☘️ Problem & Solution
✅ Q: Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
💡 Answer:
There are several reasons why many people have a negative attitude towards international tourism. However, this can be handled by adopting possible solutions, as will now be discussed.
Firstly, the influx of foreign travelers is often associated with an increase in the level of environmental pollution. Many tourists throw rubbish into the surroundings irresponsibly, which contributes to air, water and soil contamination. In addition, there might be a growing demand for transport, decreasing the air quality at the tourist destination.
Secondly, international tourism increases the odds of spreading infectious diseases into the local community. Viruses such as Ebola and H5N1 can become a threat to the locals if an infected traveler visits their country. In Vietnam, for example, many people died after a visitor from Hong Kong carried the H5N1 virus to the country in 2003. This example makes it clear why many people are still against the development of international tourism.
However, there are a range of options that can be taken to improve the situation. One measure would be that the government should continue campaigns to raise the awareness of tourists when they pay a visit to a new land. Travellers should be encouraged to put waste into the right place or to use public transport if possible. Another remedy is that there should be medical checks at airports and borders. This is to guarantee that infected visitors should be quarantined to halt the spread of the disease.
In conclusion, negative feelings about global tourism still are common in society. However, this can be resolved by taking the above suggestions.
✍️ Total words: 262
📍Band: 7.5+
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13.01.202505:27
🔔 Ideas about "Transport"
➡️ Positives of Public Transport
🏷 We need to reduce our dependence on cars.
🏷 Parking a car can be extremely difficult in big cities.
🏷 Well-designed transport systems are comfortable and convenient.
🏷 Modern public transport can be fast and cheap.
🏷 Public transport can help to reduce pollution in cities.
🏷 Investment in buses and trains will ease traffic congestion.
🏷 Buses can be given special lanes to avoid traffic.
➡️ Negatives of Public Transport
🏷 Public transport is often slow and unreliable.
🏷 Metro systems and trains are often dirty and crowded.
🏷 People feel like “sardines in a can”.
🏷 Cars are much more comfortable.
➡️ Road Safety
🏷 Driving while tired or drunk is extremely dangerous.
🏷 Mobile phones can be a dangerous distraction for drivers.
🏷 They draw the driver’s attention away from the road.
🏷 The use of phones while driving has been banned in many countries.
🏷 Punishments are becoming stricter.
🏷 Television campaigns are used to remind people to drive safely.
🏷 Speed cameras have become more common.
🏷 Speed bumps are another form of traffic calming.
🏷 Many streets are designed with the aim of slowing traffic down.
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➡️ Positives of Public Transport
🏷 We need to reduce our dependence on cars.
🏷 Parking a car can be extremely difficult in big cities.
🏷 Well-designed transport systems are comfortable and convenient.
🏷 Modern public transport can be fast and cheap.
🏷 Public transport can help to reduce pollution in cities.
🏷 Investment in buses and trains will ease traffic congestion.
🏷 Buses can be given special lanes to avoid traffic.
➡️ Negatives of Public Transport
🏷 Public transport is often slow and unreliable.
🏷 Metro systems and trains are often dirty and crowded.
🏷 People feel like “sardines in a can”.
🏷 Cars are much more comfortable.
➡️ Road Safety
🏷 Driving while tired or drunk is extremely dangerous.
🏷 Mobile phones can be a dangerous distraction for drivers.
🏷 They draw the driver’s attention away from the road.
🏷 The use of phones while driving has been banned in many countries.
🏷 Punishments are becoming stricter.
🏷 Television campaigns are used to remind people to drive safely.
🏷 Speed cameras have become more common.
🏷 Speed bumps are another form of traffic calming.
🏷 Many streets are designed with the aim of slowing traffic down.
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26.04.202518:58
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25.01.202506:29
🔖 A Lesson in Love: A Son's Tender Care for his Father
A son took his father to a restaurant to enjoy a delicious dinner. His father was quite old and therefore a little weak too.
While eating, food occasionally fell on his shirt and pants. The other guests watched the old man with their faces contorted in disgust, but his son remained calm.
After they both finished eating, the son, quietly helped his father and took him to the toilet. Cleaned food scraps from his crumpled face, and attempted to wash food stains from his clothes; graciously combed his gray hair and finally put on his glasses.
As he left the bathroom, a deep silence reigned in the restaurant. The son was ready to foot the bill, but before leaving, a man, also old, got up and asked the old man's son: 'Don't you think you left something here ? '
The young man replied: 'No, I did not leave anything.' Then the stranger said to him: 'You left a lesson here for every son, and a hope for every father! ”The whole restaurant was so quiet, you could hear a pin drop.
One of the greatest honors that exists, is being able to take care of those who have taken care of us too. Our parents and all those elders who sacrificed their lives, with all their time, money and effort for us, deserve our utmost respect.
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A son took his father to a restaurant to enjoy a delicious dinner. His father was quite old and therefore a little weak too.
While eating, food occasionally fell on his shirt and pants. The other guests watched the old man with their faces contorted in disgust, but his son remained calm.
After they both finished eating, the son, quietly helped his father and took him to the toilet. Cleaned food scraps from his crumpled face, and attempted to wash food stains from his clothes; graciously combed his gray hair and finally put on his glasses.
As he left the bathroom, a deep silence reigned in the restaurant. The son was ready to foot the bill, but before leaving, a man, also old, got up and asked the old man's son: 'Don't you think you left something here ? '
The young man replied: 'No, I did not leave anything.' Then the stranger said to him: 'You left a lesson here for every son, and a hope for every father! ”The whole restaurant was so quiet, you could hear a pin drop.
One of the greatest honors that exists, is being able to take care of those who have taken care of us too. Our parents and all those elders who sacrificed their lives, with all their time, money and effort for us, deserve our utmost respect.
#IELTS #Reading #Story
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09.01.202512:32
#Essay315 #Writing #Task2
☘️ Discuss both views
✅ Q: Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
💡 Answer:
Finding ways to improve educational quality is often one of the top priorities in every education system. In some cultures, high school students are encouraged to give their opinions about teachers, but I believe that this can also give rise to lack of respect and discipline in the classroom.
On the one hand, it is true that feedback from learners may contribute to an improvement in educational quality. In many cases, the level of comprehension of students relies very much not on the content of the lesson but on the way teachers conduct it. If, for example, the class is slow, it will be ineffective for teachers to teach too fast so that most students fail to retain the information. Without the comments of students, it would be difficult to know whether the speed of the lesson is appropriate for the class, which may eventually impair the quality of the lesson.
However, there are several drawbacks of allowing students to make comments and criticism on their teachers. Firstly, teachers can be vulnerable to the negative words of students. Many will feel that their efforts in delivering the lesson deserve praise rather than criticism or any form of feedback. This idea is commonly shared by teachers in the education systems of many Asian countries. Secondly, the classroom may be in chaos due to massive numbers of comments. Opinions vary from students to students, and it would be impractical for teachers to work out a way of teaching that can satisfy all students.
In conclusion, it seems to me that encouraging high school students to comment about their teachers does not necessarily mean an improvement in education quality.
✍️ Total words: 276
📍Band: 7.0+
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☘️ Discuss both views
✅ Q: Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
💡 Answer:
Finding ways to improve educational quality is often one of the top priorities in every education system. In some cultures, high school students are encouraged to give their opinions about teachers, but I believe that this can also give rise to lack of respect and discipline in the classroom.
On the one hand, it is true that feedback from learners may contribute to an improvement in educational quality. In many cases, the level of comprehension of students relies very much not on the content of the lesson but on the way teachers conduct it. If, for example, the class is slow, it will be ineffective for teachers to teach too fast so that most students fail to retain the information. Without the comments of students, it would be difficult to know whether the speed of the lesson is appropriate for the class, which may eventually impair the quality of the lesson.
However, there are several drawbacks of allowing students to make comments and criticism on their teachers. Firstly, teachers can be vulnerable to the negative words of students. Many will feel that their efforts in delivering the lesson deserve praise rather than criticism or any form of feedback. This idea is commonly shared by teachers in the education systems of many Asian countries. Secondly, the classroom may be in chaos due to massive numbers of comments. Opinions vary from students to students, and it would be impractical for teachers to work out a way of teaching that can satisfy all students.
In conclusion, it seems to me that encouraging high school students to comment about their teachers does not necessarily mean an improvement in education quality.
✍️ Total words: 276
📍Band: 7.0+
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